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XVI:1, February 2001

LYNX  
A Journal for Linking Poets    
 
   
  In these Participation Renga from Lynx  you will find links from:

AB 
Alice Benedict

BJ
Bob Jessup

CC
Carlos Colón 

CF
Vikki Maldonado

CG 
Cindy Guntherman

CSK
Carol Stroh Kemp 

dht
Doris H. Thurston 

DR 
David Rice

DWP
Darrel W. Parry

EF 
Eric Folsom

ESJ
Elizabeth St Jacques 

FA 
Fay Aoyagi 

FP
Francine Porad 

FPA
Francis (Paul) Attard 

GD 
Gene Doty 

GM 
Giselle Maya

GR 
George Ralph

JAJ 
Jean Jorgensen

JC 
Jeanne Cassler

JMB
John M. Bennett

JR 
Jane Reichhold

JS
John Sheirer 

JSJ
Joyce Sandeen Johnson

KCL 
Kenneth C. Leibman 

LCG 
Larry Gross

LE
Lesley Einer

LJ
Lael Johnson 

MHH
Madeline Hoffer

ML
Minna Lerman

MM 
Marianne Marks

MWM   Mary Wittry-Mason


Nika 

NA
Nasira Alma

PC
Penny Crosby 

PGC 
Pamela Connor

PJS
P.J. Sharpe 

PS
Pat Shelley


Ronan 

RF 
Robert Flannery

SCH 
Suzette Hains

SD
Simon Doubleday

SMc
Steve McComas  

TLG
Terri Lee Grell

TV 
Teresa Volz 

TW
Tundra Wind 

WR 
Werner Reichhold

YH 
Yvonne
Hardenbrook

ZP 
Zane Parks 

LYNX
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Lynx does not edit hokku or links in this section. However, links that clearly neglect the hokku poet's guidelines will not be published.

Once a renga is established, Lynx publishes all branches of that renga, as long as poets keep feeding them links.  Lynx drops any hokku or branch that no one feeds. The previous links are printed in one line just to save space.

Send your links to us by email with the words "participation renga" as subject line.
You may also send your links by regular post to: LYNX, POB 1250, Gualala, CA 95445, USA.

 

LYNX
DEADLINE FOR LINKS:

May 1, 2001

 


    PARTICIPATION RENGA

JUST DAUGHTERS
7 links
theme: family relationships

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
after thirty years I still miss her my dead sister JAJ
in a dream again back to playing hide and seek WR

coveting
my own wife CC

absent father only a ghost
in attic shadows      GD

big sister
checks the youngster's breath
missing cigarettes ESJ

~*~

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
grandpa playing solitaire JAJ
"Don't trust. Don't talk. Don't feel." RF

how can one I love
vote Republican? JR

blurted words in grade school
the room laughs until I cry   GD

~*~

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
grandpa playing solitaire JAJ
dad's third marriage I learn my new brothers & sisters one step- at a time CC

enlarging the family
sis's expanding tummy JR

living on her own
enjoying her own company JAJ

~*~

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
"get water from the well" she said, wanting me out of the kitchen GM
mother and son discuss making pickles JAJ

sex education
must, say the educators
begin at home JR

storm cellar, root cellar -
home-canned peaches
& refuge from tornadoes    GD

~*~

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
"get water from the well" she said, wanting me out of the kitchen GM
my thirst is floating back to other liquids WR

kicking
somewhere under her ribs
the unborn child JAJ

~*~

In the graveyard / a carved stone angel / with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker / turning clouds into faces cg
after thirty years I still miss her my dead sister JAJ
in a dream again back to playing hide and seek WR

now that we're older
siblings and I each our own way JAJ

 

MOST BEAUTIFUL GAME
7 Links
Rule: each link is a question; no answers!

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
rather like / a Miss Universe pageant / don't you think? JAJ
uni verse or multiverses? ??
will that be Visa or Mastercard? JAJ

carbon paper
can it be
carbon-dated? CC

fifteen percent or twenty?  GD

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play?      RF
If she sends him / one perfect rose / will he call or hide?   cg
is it better / to burn? / or to marry?    JR
Can this phoenix rise  again from the charred  ashes of summer?  CC

dream: butterfly
or butterfly ballot? GD

 

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ

Where do we come from / Why are we going? GM
what's the joke about navel seamen? JR

how many syllables
does it take to screw
up a haiku? CC

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ

Where do we come from / Why are we going? GM
Do you see that very bright star? JAJ

How about
in five hundred years? RF

why does the map
have no center?     GD

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
rather like / a Miss Universe pageant / don't you think? JAJ
uni verse or multiverses? ??

If not my link then whose? CC

will the words
of a neighbor do? JAJ

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ
Your shoe or mine? CC

What if I just say
stuff it? JAJ

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
If she sends him / one perfect rose / will he call or hide? cg
Is it better / to burn? / or to marry? JR
Is anything better than making more nuclear bombs? RF

a poor woman
birthing her 10th child? JR

 

TIME
with 3, 2 liners up to 12 links
Theme: time's length and limits

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
Nasira waiting for us at the edge of eternity CC

I'm sure it was she
who visited my dream
just last week JAJ

Polaris
was not always
the pole star RF

oh to sit forever
in the warm cradle
of the moon ESJ

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
patches of snow mound of primulas in bloom JAJ

the tension gone
from his strings
Howdy Doody CC

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
sleepless / how long the hours / of night? JSJ
both hands point in the same direction CC

early winter
sun down at 4 pm now JAJ

still appealing
with upturned palms
the stone virgin ESJ

 

GENTLY WIPING DUST
Alternate 3-line and 2-line links for 100 lines
Theme: impermanence, transitoriness

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph

october windsong TW

warm fall days chill at sunset BJ

last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC

nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR

taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC

flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ

haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG

meteorite streaks across the night sky

sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun on a bayou mist KCL

first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ

thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG

breath suspended overhead ... the northern lights in slow dance JAJ

father and son pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course weeds in the dark field

bend again GR

up ahead another hidden curve ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife

their fiftieth year GR

finishing the school of hard knocks YH

digital display counting down the failing heart GD

she tries to add up all the good times YH

was never very good at math MHH

one more short story attempt

into the waste basket GR

sharp edges cutting through the trash bag

shadows leaking out GD

thickening juice from the black beans can JMB

long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ

mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD

it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH

even the firecrackers refuse to light –

a rainy fourth! dht

indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War

one gray; one blue RF

refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC

stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA

mackerel clouds reach every horizon piling the sea JR

broken thermometer poisonous mercury scatters everywhere JAJ

driving through a school zone
spray of sparrows RF

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph

october windsong TW

warm fall days chill at sunset BJ

last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC

nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR

taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC

flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ

haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG

meteorite streaks across the night sky

sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun on a bayou mist KCL

first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ

thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG

breath suspended overhead ... the northern lights in slow dance JAJ

father and son pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course weeds in the dark field

bend again GR

up ahead another hidden curve ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife

their fiftieth year GR

finishing the school of hard knocks YH

digital display counting down the failing heart GD

she tries to add up all the good times YH

was never very good at math MHH

one more short story attempt

into the waste basket GR

sharp edges cutting through the trash bag

shadows leaking out GD

thickening juice from the black beans can JMB

long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ

mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD

it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH

even the firecrackers refuse to light –

a rainy fourth! dht

indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War

one gray; one blue RF

refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC

stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA

returning for Easter / without painted eggs / from a far place GM

the rabbit in the dark of the moon WR

hairless after
you get through with it
my lucky foot CC

first rays of dawn
bantam rooster wakes up
the whole family JAJ

moon-shadow cast on
melting snow         GD

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph

october windsong TW

warm fall days chill at sunset BJ

last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC

nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR

taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC

flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ

haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG

meteorite streaks across the night sky

sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun on a bayou mist KCL

first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ

thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG

breath suspended overhead ... the northern lights in slow dance JAJ

father and son pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR

up ahead another hidden curve ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their fiftieth year GR

finishing the school of hard knocks YH

digital display counting the failing heart GD

she tries to add up all the good times YH

battery low the calculator reads "ERROR" GD

the new player late for the first game R

dealing cards to an empty chair careless of how they land GD

face-down $10,000 poorer CC

richer for the experience bottoms up YH

"How do you stop a wino from charging?" CC

at the end of that rainbow no credit card cg

back to the diner waiting tables JSJ

old woman slips jelly packets into her purse cg

mistaking a condom / for a condiment GD

runs her tongue / over red lips, / snaps her purse shut cg

Quiet out at sea the boat sinks JMB

belly up as we like it both WR

under revision again
my top ten list CC

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph

october windsong TW

warm fall days chill at sunset BJ

last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC

nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR

taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC

flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ

haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG

meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun on a bayou mist KCL

first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ

thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG

breath suspended overhead ... the northern lights in slow dance JAJ

father and son pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR

up ahead another hidden curve ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their fiftieth year GR

finishing the school of hard knocks YH

digital display counting down the failing heart GD

she tries to add up all the good times YH

was never very good at math MHH

one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR

sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD

thickening juice from the black beans can JMB

long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ

mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD

it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH

even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht

indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War one gray; one blue RF

turned up by the plow / a musket's firing plate GD

breaking / in the dustpan / last wedding cup cg

after three years divorce papers JSJ

Solomon sharpening his sword CC

she leaves in the nick of time     ESJ

The Judgment:
5 to 4                   RF

the smooth edge
of the glazed vase       JAJ

behind the tool shed
a rusting scythe              GD

~*~

~*~

gently wiping dust  from grandmother's photograph 

                october windsong   TW

warm fall days  chill at sunset  BJ

last rush of color  outdoing itself virginia creeper  PC

nights behind closed eyes  images in red float by  JR

taps at sunrise  opening daylilies on their graves   PC

flowers of our youth  gone – everyone  MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one   JAJ

haiku eagle gliding  in a sea of chance   LCG

meteorite streaks  across the night sky 

                sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun  on a bayou mist   KCL

first snow  already melting  dancing barefoot   JAJ

thinking of Tundra  buying new shoes   TLG

breath suspended  overhead ... the northern lights  in                 slow dance   JAJ

father and son      pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course  weeds in the dark field

                bend again   GR

up ahead another hidden curve   ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife 

                their fiftieth year  GR

finishing the school   of hard knocks   YH

digital display   counting  the failing heart  GD

she tries to add up    all the good times   YH

battery low   the calculator  reads "ERROR"   GD

the new player   late for the first game       R

dealing cards  to an empty chair

careless of how they land                  GD

face-down     $10,000 poorer                      CC

richer for the experience  bottoms up                YH

"How do you stop      a wino from charging?" CC

at the end   of that rainbow      no credit card             cg

back to the diner   waiting tables                       JSJ

old woman     slips jelly packets   into her purse    cg

mistaking a condom / for a condiment                GD

runs her tongue / over red lips,  / snaps her purse shut        cg

Quiet out at sea     the boat sinks                       JMB

Swirl of your soul into the siren's whirlpool      CC

 hot songs melt the wax
from  sailors' ears              GD

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph

october windsong TW

warm fall days chill at sunset BJ

last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC

nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR

taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC

flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM

mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ

haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG

meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM

morning sun on a bayou mist KCL

first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ

thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG

breath suspended overhead ... the northern lights in slow dance JAJ

father and son pause for a long moment RF

breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR

up ahead another hidden curve ESJ

SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their fiftieth year GR

finishing the school of hard knocks YH

digital display counting down the failing heart GD

she tries to add up all the good times YH

was never very good at math MHH

one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR

sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD

thickening juice from the black beans can JMB

long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ

mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD

it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH

even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht

indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War

one gray; one blue RF

refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC

stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA

mackerel clouds reach every horizon piling the sea JR

dancing a pas de deux for one more night WR

flat on her bum
unexpected ice patch JAJ

 

(A brand new renga – get in now to make it work your way!)

AT THE BEACH
Rule: 3 – 2 lines alternating
Ends with 12 links

fulfilling a last request
gray north wind
pummels with heavy drops RF

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This Renga ENDS THIS TIME – DO NOT ADD ON! But enjoy!
BE BLANK
1-line links – theme: blankness
Be blank my startled thigh (foam JMB

a sea of faces JAJ

: ) ] : ( [ : o # 8 ( { : ) x CC

school skeleton dead tired FPA

erased blackboard JSJ

galaxy unspun cocoon () surge JR

damply in the darkened tree JMB

white on white dress JSJ

a wall from which ivy was torn GM

pine ash beech oleander FPA

waiting for her to blossom GM

faintly a small star falls WR

bottomless abyss CC

~*~

Be blank my startled thigh (foam JMB

a sea of faces JAJ

: ) ] : ( [ : o # 8 ( { : ) x CC

school skeleton dead tired FPA

erased blackboard JSJ

vanishing chalk marks that add up to zero CC

melted snowballs JSJ

plowed unplanted field cg

( ) JSJ

the "name" list reversed JMB

empty cookie jar JSJ

dry arroyo JAJ

a vote or a dimple? CC

~*~

Be blank my startled thigh (foam JMB

Hirshhorn canvas better blank (crap KCL

form of perfect writhing JMB

on my arm a hand made basket JR

woven around space dht

the eggless nest <> just her size JR

a body of water

without reflections GM

the glass bell missing its clapper PGC

no lead in his pencil cg

nudissimo RF

song without end JAJ

etch-a-sketch erased CC

this silence within silence ESJ

humming a prayer without understanding JR

~*~

Be blank my startled thigh (foam JMB

Hirshhorn canvas better blank (crap KCL

form of perfect writhing JMB

on my arm a hand made basket JR

woven around space dht

the eggless nest <> just her size JR

a body of water without reflections GM

the glass bell missing its clapper PGC

no lead in his pencil cg

neon light in the fog, "paper" JMB

with the poems written on the universe JR

but they don't rhyme !siren! CC

drifting off into sweet nothingness ESJ

~*~

Be blank my startled thigh (foam JMB

a sea of faces JAJ

: ) ] : ( [ : o # 8 ( { : ) x CC

school skeleton dead tired FPA

erased blackboard JSJ

galaxy unspun cocoon () surge JR

damply in the darkened tree JMB

white on white dress JSJ

a wall from which ivy was torn GM

pine ash beech oleander FPA

waiting for her to blossom GM

faintly a small star falls WR

how brief the mirage ESJ

 

   
   
 

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