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TABLE OF CONTENTS

XVI:3 October, 2001

LYNX  
A Journal for Linking Poets    
 
   
  In these Participation Renga from Lynx  you will find links from:

AB 
Alice Benedict

BJ
Bob Jessup

CC
Carlos Colón 

CF
Vikki Maldonado

CG 
Cindy Guntherman

CSK
Carol Stroh Kemp 

dht
Doris H. Thurston 

DR 
David Rice

DWP
Darrel W. Parry

EF 
Eric Folsom

ESJ
Elizabeth St Jacques 

FA 
Fay Aoyagi 

FP
Francine Porad 

FPA
Francis (Paul) Attard 

GD 
Gene Doty 

GM 
Giselle Maya

GR 
George Ralph

JAJ 
Jean Jorgensen

JC 
Jeanne Cassler

JMB
John M. Bennett

JR 
Jane Reichhold

JS
John Sheirer 

JSJ
Joyce Sandeen Johnson

KCL 
Kenneth C. Leibman 

LCG 
Larry Gross

LE
Lesley Einer

LJ
Lael Johnson 

MHH
Madeline Hoffer

ML
Minna Lerman

MM 
Marianne Marks

MWM   Mary Wittry-Mason


Nika 

NA
Nasira Alma

PC
Penny Crosby 

PGC 
Pamela Connor

PJS
P.J. Sharpe 

PS
Pat Shelley


Ronan 

RF 
Robert Flannery

SCH 
Suzette Hains

SD
Simon Doubleday

SMc
Steve McComas  

TLG
Terri Lee Grell

TV 
Teresa Volz 

TW
Tundra Wind 

WR 
Werner Reichhold

YH 
Yvonne
Hardenbrook

ZP 
Zane Parks 

LYNX
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LYNX
DEADLINE FOR LINKS:

January 1, 2002

 


    [Remember: only links written in italics are open for your new links.]

AT THE BEACH
Rule: 3 – 2 lines alternating
Ends with 12 links

fulfilling a last request
gray north wind
pummels with heavy drops Robert Flannery

tourists wading in surf eyes open for sharks GD

receding wave
a small boy bends
to one more shell              cg

from afar
calling her through both hands
white teeth                    WR

~*~

fulfilling a last request
gray north wind
pummels with heavy drops Robert Flannery

in rain the rocks find their colors cg

drilling three holes -
the rose quartz
bowling trophy         CC

spring clear air
blows atop Mount Saint Helena
down the greened Napa Valley         RF

deep in the wave
just as it breaks
light glints             GD

missing the obvious
he slashes his foot
on a mussel-covered rock         JAJ

 

GENTLY WIPING DUST
Alternate 3-line and 2-line links for 100 lines
Theme: impermanence, transitoriness

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
battery low the calculator reads "ERROR" GD
the new player late for the first game RF
dealing cards to an empty chair careless of how they land GD
face-down $10,000 poorer CC
richer for the experience bottoms up YH
"How do you stop a wino from charging?" CC
at the end of that rainbow no credit card cg
back to the diner waiting tables JSJ
old woman slips jelly packets into her purse cg
mistaking a condom / for a condiment GD
runs her tongue / over red lips, / snaps her purse shut cg
Quiet out at sea the boat sinks JMB
hot songs melt the wax from sailors' ears GD
her old spaniel  sings along with Jimmy Buffet    cg

under the window
cats profess their love           JAJ

 

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
battery low the calculator reads "ERROR" GD
the new player late for the first game RF
dealing cards to an empty chair careless of how they land GD
face-down $10,000 poorer CC
richer for the experience bottoms up YH
"How do you stop a wino from charging?" CC
at the end of that rainbow no credit card cg
back to the diner waiting tables JSJ
old woman slips jelly packets into her purse cg
mistaking a condom / for a condiment GD
runs her tongue / over red lips, / snaps her purse shut cg
Quiet out at sea the boat sinks JMB
hot songs melt the wax from sailors' ears GD
listening to a star leaving the lake WR

heaving light
beneath the wave         JMB

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky
sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting down the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
was never very good at math MHH
one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR
sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD
thickening juice from the black beans can JMB
long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ
mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD
it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH
even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht
indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War one gray; one blue RF
turned up by the plow / a musket's firing plate GD
breaking / in the dustpan / last wedding cup cg
after three years divorce papers JSJ
Solomon sharpening his sword CC

she leaves in the nick of time ESJ
trio of melting clocks chime to the tune of "Hello Dali" CC

digital flicker liquid
crystals seconds display       GD

after the rainstorm
every thing so fresh
and tall                             JAJ

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
battery low the calculator reads "ERROR" GD
the new player late for the first game RF
dealing cards to an empty chair careless of how they land GD
face-down $10,000 poorer CC
richer for the experience bottoms up YH
"How do you stop a wino from charging?" CC
at the end of that rainbow no credit card cg
back to the diner waiting tables JSJ
old woman slips jelly packets into her purse cg
mistaking a condom / for a condiment GD
runs her tongue / over red lips, / snaps her purse shut cg
Quiet out at sea the boat sinks JMB
hot songs melt the wax from sailors' ears GD
The Great Lost Kinks Album needle stuck in the last groove CC

"Just a little prick"
nurse with a syringe         GD

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting down the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
was never very good at math MHH
one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR
sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD
thickening juice from the black beans can JMB
long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ
mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD
it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH
even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht
indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War one gray; one blue RF
refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC
stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA
returning for Easter / without painted eggs / from a far place GM
the rabbit in the dark of the moon WR
first rays of dawn  bantam rooster wakes up the whole family JAJ
was it all a dream: cream on top of bottled milk? ESJ

The farmhouse mulberry
spread shade and dropped
large juicy berries                RF

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting down the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
was never very good at math MHH
one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR
sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD
thickening juice from the black beans can JMB
long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ
mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD
it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH
even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht
indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War one gray; one blue RF
refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC
stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA
mackerel clouds reach every horizon piling the sea JR
broken thermometer poisonous mercury scatters everywhere JAJ
driving through a school zone spray of sparrows RF
waiting at the end of the block police speed trap JAJ

she remembers when fast
was dad’s Model T                  cg

another hole
in the cheese                       CC

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting down the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
was never very good at math MHH
one more short story attempt into the waste basket GR
sharp edges cutting through the trash bag shadows leaking out GD
thickening juice from the black beans can JMB
long time on shelf honey crystallizes sticky jar JSJ
mustard seeds pop in hot oil GD
it will be a cold day in July when I cook again YH
even the firecrackers refuse to light – a rainy fourth! dht
indoors all afternoon two boys play Civil War one gray; one blue RF
refugee children / strangers to laughter PGC
stray sniffing / stranded starfish – / gray sky's cold FPA
mackerel clouds reach every horizon piling the sea JR
broken thermometer poisonous mercury scatters everywhere JAJ
driving through a school zone spray of sparrows RF
brownian motion: grandchildren zooming around the room GD

radio signal
the break-up song breaking up      CC

~*~

gently wiping dust from grandmother's photograph october windsong TW
warm fall days chill at sunset BJ
last rush of color outdoing itself virginia creeper PC
nights behind closed eyes images in red float by JR
taps at sunrise opening daylilies on their graves PC
flowers of our youth gone – everyone MM
mind wasting memories disappear one by one JAJ
haiku eagle gliding in a sea of chance LCG
meteorite streaks across the night sky sudden cool breeze MWM
morning sun on a bayou mist KCL
first snow already melting dancing barefoot JAJ
thinking of Tundra buying new shoes TLG
breath suspended overhead, the northern lights in slow dance JAJ
father and son pause for a long moment RF
breeze changing course weeds in the dark field bend again GR
up ahead another hidden curve ESJ
SOFT SHOULDERS warning he glances at his wife their 50th year GR
finishing the school of hard knocks YH
digital display counting the failing heart GD
she tries to add up all the good times YH
battery low the calculator reads "ERROR" GD
the new player late for the first game RF
dealing cards to an empty chair careless of how they land GD
face-down $10,000 poorer CC
richer for the experience bottoms up YH
"How do you stop a wino from charging?" CC
at the end of that rainbow no credit card cg
back to the diner waiting tables JSJ
old woman slips jelly packets into her purse cg
mistaking a condom  for a condiment GD
runs her tongue  over red lips,  snaps her purse shut cg
Quiet out at sea the boat sinks JMB
belly up as we like it both WR
under revision again my top ten list CC
fifteenth time around the block chasing a size 8  ESJ

dripping from her neck
a pair of skates             CC

 

JUST DAUGHTERS
7 links
theme: family relationships

In the graveyard a carved stone angel with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker  turning clouds into faces cg
"get water from the well" she said, wanting me out of the kitchen GM
mother and son discuss making pickles JAJ
sex education must, say the educators begin at home JR
old uncle's eyes slowly disrobe his niece  ESJ

out of the closet
so many cases of
family incest            JAJ

two hands
a glass pane away
visitor’s day             CC

~*~

In the graveyard  a carved stone angel  with my
daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker  turning clouds into faces cg
after thirty years I still miss her my dead sister JAJ
in a dream again back to playing hide and seek WR
absent father only a ghost in attic shadows GD
grandmother's teakettle still sings on the stove   cg

laughing over e-mail
from our daughter’s
daughter                   GD

~*~

In the graveyard a carved stone angel with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker  turning clouds into faces cg
"get water from the well" she said, wanting me out of the kitchen GM
mother and son discuss making pickles JAJ
sex education must, say the educators begin at home JR
up on the armoire kids find the porno mag JAJ

sticky wings
of a moth               JMB

~*~

In the graveyard a carved stone angel with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker  turning clouds into faces cg
grandpa playing solitaire JAJ
"Don't trust. Don't talk. Don't feel." RF
blurted out words in grade school the room laughs until I cry GD
whispering together in another language late grandparents JAJ

prairie grasses flow
across my mother’s grave     GD

~*~

In the graveyard a carved stone angel with my daughter's face GM
grandma in her rocker  turning clouds into faces cg
after thirty years I still miss her my dead sister JAJ
in a dream again back to playing hide and seek WR
big sister checks the youngster's breath missing cigarettes ESJ
twin sons loving them for who they are JAJ

aunts roll their eyes
at a niece’s tantrum      cg

 

LA RENGA LOCA
Rules: This is an acrostic renga. Subsequent links must spell out some haikai-related word by reading the first letter of each word down the lines. Finish with 12 links.

La Renga Loca
Your muses lock horns with
Night Blooming Jazzman
X-treme Poetry – Carlos Colón

How easy it is
Always writing verbs that end
In ing
Keep it to a minimum and
Use the present tense without
   JAJ

 

She wouldn’t be as
Holy
I
F
T
he neighbor’s boy wasn’t that shy     WR

T
H
eoretically one would
Reach out for an
Endangered species
Emigrate from
Linear thinking, leap
Into
Never explored spiritual territory
Eliminating blah-blah and
Report back about the transparency of a raindrop WR

 

 

SWARMING
6-word links on the
Theme: swarming

Storm a hand, shape of wind -John M. Bennett

just as the sunflower opens – bees!     cg

The pounding footsteps blue-light special     CC

church walls filled with the bees     JAJ

carrying the birds - idea of food      JR

 

 

TIME
with 3, 2 liners up to 12 links
Theme: time's length and limits

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
Nasira waiting for us at the edge of eternity CC
oh to sit forever in the warm cradle of the moon ESJ
even now we walk through the breath of angels    cg

from the top
of Mount Tamalpais
one more step             GD

spinning
from the top of a wave
my next shape             JR

 

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time  JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
patches of snow mound of primulas in bloom JAJ
the tension gone from his strings Howdy Doody CC
how many neighbors don't "Make Room for Daddy" ?    cg

behind the screen
on Sullivan’s stage
Elvis writhes                  GD

Sid Melton
spewing a cup
of coffee                       CC

 

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time  JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
patches of snow mound of primulas in bloom JAJ
the tension gone from his strings Howdy Doody CC
falling apart as she is carted away old mannequin    ESJ

sorting jackets
in the thrift shop -
tarnished penny            GD

no head
la mujer invisible         JMB

carrot and coal
in a pool of snow          CC

 

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
Nasira waiting for us at the edge of eternity CC
oh to sit forever in the warm cradle of the moon ESJ
the thinnest sickle of light beyond clouds   GD

and opposite
the northern lights
begin their dance              JAJ

sun rise
the curve of a hill
spreads the glow              JR

 

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
sleepless / how long the hours / of night? JSJ
both hands point in the same direction CC
still appealing with upturned palms the stone virgin ESJ
Death – nothing more than a pitstop for Earnheart CC

plastic birdbath
4th season of crows
tips it a bit                      cg

 

~*~

birds winging south / no speed limit / only time JSJ
for how long / this dream? RF
clocks changed again - / spring ahead / fall back GM
Nasira waiting for us at the edge of eternity CC
I'm sure it was she who visited my dream just last week JAJ
in absence of friends your own age lighting a candle WR

lava lamp
the sixties bubbling
into rebirth                      CC

 

WITHIN/WITHOUT
Alternate 3-line and 2-line links for 30 lines
Theme: interconnectedness

sliding open this bathroom window startling Orion -Robert Flannery

left the hair
combed my hand             JMB

with jeans a belt of stars
the radiance of a daughter  JR

 

THISGAMEISENDEDTHISGAMEISENDED
MOST BEAUTIFUL GAME
7 Links
Rule: each link is a question; no answers!
Do not add on links.  Just Enjoy. Thanks!

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
If she sends him / one perfect rose / will he call or hide? cg
Is it better / to burn? / or to marry? JR
Can this phoenix rise again /from the charred ashes of summer? CC
dream: butterfly / or butterfly ballot? GD
is that just flapping in the wind? ESJ

no, but where
has my hair ribbon gone?         JAJ

How do these golden clouds
prepare for sunset?                 RF

who can tell what seed
some sparrow will plant?          cg

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
If she sends him / one perfect rose / will he call or hide? cg
Is it better / to burn? / or to marry? JR
Is anything better than making more nuclear bombs? RF
a poor woman birthing her 10th child? JR
fathered by a cannibal who is a philanthropist? WR

where has the primal horde
stampeded to now?                 GD

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ
Where do we come from / Why are we going? GM
what's the joke about navel seamen? JR
how many syllables does it take to screw up a haiku? CC
does it come from your head or your gut? cg

How can rain fall
from empty sky?                     RF

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ
Where do we come from / Why are we going? GM
what's the joke about navel seamen? JR
how many syllables does it take to screw up a haiku? CC
how many fools to pull out the chair? JAJ

which hurts worse,
my pride or posterior?               CC

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
rather like / a Miss Universe pageant / don't you think? JAJ
uni verse or multiverses? ??
will that be Visa or Mastercard? JAJ
fifteen per cent or twenty? GD
does it really matter? JAJ

is the clock a phone?               JMB

~*~

What are the rules / for the most beautiful game, / and who can play? RF
What are you seeking / when you smile / at strangers? JSJ

Where do we come from / Why are we going? GM
Do you see that very bright star? JAJ
How about in five hundred years? RF
Can I buy shares in stockings interneted    WR

what is the price of peers’ pears
palliated on a pair of piers?          JR

 

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